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Someone pointed out

That I’m using Haiku form

Not a true Haiku

  • That’s certainly right

    But I’m just having some fun

    Hope I don’t offend

    One Response

    1. haiku’s “proper” form
      like that of “proper” English
      changes with the times

      poetic license
      haiku imagination
      word-worlds come alive

      swirling syllables
      conjuring images is
      haiku happiness

      haiku is freedom
      within certain tight constraints
      just like life itself

      http://www.haikupoet.com/definitions/dan_brook.html

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