Someone pointed out
That I’m using Haiku form
Not a true Haiku
That’s certainly right
But I’m just having some fun
Hope I don’t offend
Someone pointed out
That I’m using Haiku form
Not a true Haiku
That’s certainly right
But I’m just having some fun
Hope I don’t offend
haiku’s “proper” form
like that of “proper” English
changes with the times
poetic license
haiku imagination
word-worlds come alive
swirling syllables
conjuring images is
haiku happiness
haiku is freedom
within certain tight constraints
just like life itself
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